I loved it. I would love to see this as a series, even if it was just like 4 episodes or something.
It's alright. The lines are really shaky, her facial features are a bit weird, and the place where her neck connects to her head is weird. Over all its alright, but it needs some work. I feel like Vixuzar was a bit to harsh, because it is decent, but he is right that it lacks technique. Good luck with you other art stuffs.
That faces it a bit weird, but everything else looks great.
Thx 4 the review mate :)
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